The Summer at Whispering Hope

by Jean Woodward

    Sarah Collins is a 24 year old Oklahoma librarian whose mother has just passed away. When we first meet Sarah she is being proposed to by her long-time lukewarm boyfriend Ralph. The proposal happens in a diner over coffee and without any real enthusiasm. Ralph feels it's his responsibility to marry Sarah since she now has no other family but his lack of any romantic passion, to the extent of never even having said "I love you" to her, pushes her to decline his offer. Despite being a dowdy, plain, small town girl Sarah has dreams of an all-consuming passionate love. 

    Sarah's recently received a letter from Aunt Theo, her mother's sister and her only living relative, inviting her to come spend the summer at her Oregon lodge. Despite the disapproval from Ralph and her boss at the library Sarah decides to make the trip and to try and have some adventure before returning to Oklahoma and inevitably settling down to a life of Mrs. Ralph Martin.

    The trip will involve staying a night in Portland and Sarah decides to use this as an opportunity to remodel herself. Away from the judgmental eyes of her neighbors she gets her long hair cut off, buys makeup, and a fashionable new wardrobe, leaving her frumpy clothes in the hotel closet with a note asking them to be donated. 

    The next day she boards a bus bound for the tiny town of Whispering Hope and trips over a passengers cane and falls into the arms of Nicky Forbes, a gorgeous young blonde man. Sarah is humiliated by the brief incident but Nicky is intrigued by the shy beauty. Sitting in the seat behind him on the bus Sarah hears a strange and somewhat hostile conversation between him and a teenage native boy named Cain, something about an "accident".

    Once in town Sarah is picked up by Alan Donahue, the "intense, brooding, head wrangler" at her aunts lodge. Sarah is instantly smitten with the handsome and quiet cowboy but unfortunately she has competition in the form of  Corinne Cranston, a New York model vacationing at the lodge. Despite having a boyfriend back home Corinne makes it clear to Sarah that Donahue is her territory.

    Sarah notices the low guest turn out at the lodge and her questions about the business cause concerned looks among Theo and Donahue and gossipy whispers tell her it has something to do with "the accident". Sarah offers to help out around the place and this unintentionally gives her more time with Donahue and after a few weeks she feels they've grown something of a bond. However this feeling wont last long.

    A trail ride and picnic, led by Donahue, has been arranged for the lodge guests. Sarah believes a city girl like Corinne would never be interested in such activities and so is deeply disappointed when Corinne not only joins in but proves to be an extremely skilled horseback rider, impressing Donahue. Once at the picnic spot the guest head off to look at a waterfall and Sarah and Donahue remain behind to set up the food. Alone together Donahue pulls Sarah close and just as their lips are about to touch Corinne returns and is not happy with what she sees. She claws her nails into Sarah's arm and throws herself at Donahue. 

    As the picnic ends Sarah lets her jealous get the best of her and she trips Corinne causing the girl to fall into bushes and get scraped up. Donahue, furious at Sarah, carries Corinne to her horse and pays extra attention to her on the ride home. 

    As the riders pass the lake on the way to the lodge a motor boat passes by and Sarah recognizes it's passenger as Nicky. He recognizes her too and pulls up to talk. As the two chat Donahue appears looking for Sarah and is angered at the sight of Nicky, the two clearly have some bad blood. 

    The next day Sarah goes down to the beach where Corinne is sunbathing and the model informs her that she spent the night at Donahue's cabin. 

    Sarah recognized the lodge needs some improvement and modernizing to attract new guest and so offers to help repaint the cabins, a project that Donahue joins in on. The two become close again as they work and Donahue even kisses Sarah. However that night, unable to sleep, Sarah goes out on the terrace and in the moonlight she sees Corinne and Donahue kissing. 

    The next day Sarah is cold towards him and Donahue downplays Sarah's feeling and insists he's simply trying to please a paying customer at the lodge. Corinne then shows up, having caught word that the two were working alone together, and once again angrily stakes her claim on the cowboy. After that Corinne will keep Donahue busy by booking him to take her on trail rides. 

    When Sarah take a boat out onto the lake she encounters Nicky who gives her a tour of the lake and they have a picnic lunch together. Sarah asks him about "the accident" but he doesn't tell her. Determined to know about the strange mystery hanging over the inhabitants of the lake Sarah is finally able to get her aunt to tell the story to her.

    Last summer Nicky, his sister Barbara, and their friends went to Echo Island in the middle of the lake for a party. Someone had smuggled a keg over and after a few drinks Debbie, Donahue's 18 year old sister, asked Nicky to take her for a boat ride. The ride ended in a horrific crash against the rocks which left Debbie blind. A few days later there had been an attempted kidnapping of Barbara on Echo Island. And soon after that a violent bear had appeared around the lodge smashing cabin windows and frightening guests. All of it had reduced business for Theo.

    Sarah decides to ride over to Donahue's family ranch the next day and visit Debbie. However Debbie, depressed and sulking in her own misery, doesn't want any visitors. Sarah and Mr. Donahue plan to have Sarah visit again and to try to get Debbie out of her shell. 

    Upon returning home Sarah finds Corrine and Donahue passionately kissing in the tack room. This will be the last time she sees them kiss as Corrine has just been called away to a modeling job in the Bahamas. However by this point Sarah is disillusioned with the man.

    The next day she visits Nicky who lives in a mansion on the other side of the lake. Nicky's father, Nathan Forbes is outside and greets Sarah but he's kind of a creep. He's obsessed with the idea of buying the lodge from Theo and turning it into some chain resort but Theo has refused to sell at any price. 

    Nathan leaves when Nicky arrives and Sarah is able to hear his side of "the accident". He insists that night he was not drunk despite drinking and that Cain had thrown a firework into his boat which landed by the fuel tank. As Nicky grabbed for the firework the boat crashed on the rocks. 

    Sarah is awoken early the next more by her aunt, Debbie is missing and they're going out to search for her. When her father went to wake her up this morning she was gone and with her blindness they worry about her being lost in the woods. Sarah is to go to their ranch and stay there incase the girl returns while the family searches for her. As Sarah sits on the porch she notices an outdoor storage trunk with it's lid partially off. She goes to fix it and finds Debbie in there hiding. Sarah holds no punches when scolding Debbie for wallowing in self-pity and causing her family distress. 

    Upon returning home that evening Nicky arrives to ask Sarah to dinner. He takes her to a fancy medieval themed restaurant owned by his father. The evening is magical and upon taking her home Nicky kisses Sarah with all the passion she desires. He then ruins it all but asking her to come stay at his Portland "pad" for a few days where they can enjoy a "few days of love". Insulted that Nicky would make such a proposition she ends things with him. 

    The next morning she takes off for a horseback ride to clear her mind but when a bear spooks her horse she is bucked off and left to try and find her way home. Donahue finds her and she falls weeping into his arms. They make up and later he tells her he's falling in love with her. 

    Sarah visits Debbie again and makes some progress on befriending the girl. She returns home to find Theo upset, the mysterious bear has returned again to break cabin windows. In order to keep the guest from focusing on the bear Theo decides to throw a luau party on the beach. 

    As Sarah and Theo are out on the beach planning the party Donahue pulls up in his truck with a passenger: Corinne. She's returned and still has eyes for the cowboy. Confused Sarah approaches him for an explanation but he tells her to meet him in the tack room when he's done with Corinne and winks. Disgusted by the insinuation Sarah slaps him and takes off on a horse to be alone. 

    As the night approaches Sarah returns and when placing her saddle in the tack room she stumbles on a hidden bear costume. Sarah now believes Donahue was behind the "bear" attacks and when he appears in the tack room she freaks out and runs off in fear. In her room she tries to calm down and decides to read Ralphs new letter to help. After being disillusioned by Nicky and now Donahue Sarah yearns for the respectfully boring Ralph, planning to return to Oklahoma immediately and marry him. However the letter turns out to be a "Dear John", Ralph has eloped with a new girl in town. 

    Sarah dresses and attends the luau, planning to tell Theo about the "bear" after the party. Corinne ends up stumbling down to the beach drunk on whiskey at which time her boyfriend from back home appears to drag her home. Nicky shows up and takes Sarah for a boat ride where he attempts to reconcile but he recognizes that she's finished with him.

    Back home Nicky finds his father drunk and when the two begin talking about Sarah and the lodge Mr. Forbes fiendishly admits he was the one behind the accidents. He hired Cain to throw the fireworks that night and he faked an attempted kidnapping on his own daughter, all in the hopes it would ruin business for the lodge and force Theo to sell. With all respect for his father gone Nicky goes up to bed and cries. 

    That night Sarah wakes up to her window breaking and a huge bear climbing in. She screams her head off and is picked up and carried out on to the terrace. Hearing her screams the guest come outside and the bear drops her and flees. Unaware it's a bear costume, a lodge worker shoots the bear who falls down. Thinking Donahue has just been shot Sarah rushes to him but when the mask is removed it's revealed to be Elmer, the mentally challenged son of the Forbes' housekeeper, hired by Mr. Forbes to frighten away lodge guests. He's alive and taken to the hospital where he will successfully recover. The mystery is solved and Sarah and Donahue become engaged, in the lodge kitchen, over coffee. 

- The "lodge worker' that shoots the "bear" is Mike, a love interest for Theo and part of the story but I couldn't add him into the summary without it getting (even more) over-detailed. Sorry, Mike.

- The fashion in this is soooo dated. It's from 1979 so obviously it's going to be dated but I don't think I've read another book with so much stereotypical fashion from an era. Sarah has a pantsuit in every blinding color imaginable, Corrine wears silver platform shoes with matching shorts and a tube top, and best of all, Nicky shows up to the luau in a white, skintight jumpsuit.

- Sarah takes a bath every night and Jean Woodward felt the need to include a scene of it every time.

- The writing is fairly juvenile. The way Corinne speaks to Sarah about Donahue being her claim is how a 12 year old girl would talk about her schoolyard crush. Sarah's makeover of cutting her hair and buying new clothes reminded me a story my sister wrote when she was 11 about a girl who tells everyone at school she's moving away then shows up the next day with a new hair cut, new clothes, and a new name and becomes the new popular girl with no one recognizing her. It feels very childish and at times I felt I was reading a book written by a preteen. Also Sarah is a shy small town girl who suddenly is making sassy remarks to Corinne, it was like she was having personality switches. 

- Donahue's a red flag. He's in his mid 30s, never been married, and has romances every summer with lodge guests. When Sarah catches him kissing Corinne in the tack room he says "it's not what it looks like" but no other explanation is given. I guess this was suppose to be excused as "keeping paying guest happy" like all his other romantic interactions with Corinne. Will he still be keeping guests happy after him and Sarah marry?

- I was kinda hoping for a Ralph redemption scene. Sarah doesn't want to be with Ralph because there's no passion but when he sees her off at the airport he wraps her in his arms and kisses her passionately  leading Sarah to think there might be more to Ralph after all. I thought maybe he would show up at the lodge and win her over but he's just written out towards the end. 

    Overall this book is....meh. It's not the worst I've ever read by far and I did want to continue reading to see what happens but as I said, it often felt I was reading something written by a little girl and I can't see myself re-reading it.