Showing posts with label winifred wise. Show all posts
Showing posts with label winifred wise. Show all posts

Friday, June 26, 2020

The Wishing Year



    In the 1960's Whitman put out a number of stand alone books under the series name A Teen Novel and A Whitman Novel For Girls. It's unclear why there was two different names.

    This is one of the last ones I read and I can't remember anything about it. I vaguely recall a girl being at the beach and then going to a boys house but I really can't remember so this will be like reading a whole new book.

    Cheryl Kramer opens a box of cereal one morning before school and inside finds a wishing ring; a plastic ring you're suppose to make a wish on. Although Cheryl scoffs at "all this junk you get in cereals" she takes it with her to school and decides to make three wishes with it. She wishes to be thinner, to be noticed by her crush, Bill Meyers, and to join a sorority. Like the main character in many books about high school girls in the 1960's, Cheryl believes joining a sorority will change her whole life, bring all her hopes and dreams to reality, and cure all her problems.

    At school she shows the ring to her two best friends and says that once she's done with it she'll pass it around to them to make wishes.

    After school she walks to her grandmothers house for a visit. Her grandmother is very old fashioned and religious. She believes living frugally is important and disapproves of the modernization and continuous growth of their city. 

    Uncle Elmer lives with grandmother and Cheryl is happy to find that he is not home. Cheryl looks down on her uncle because he is an alcoholic. Her family has explained to her that her uncle's drinking is his way to cope with the trauma of surviving the Bataan Death March in WW2 but Cheryl, coldly, does not see that as a valid excuse.

    She heads home late to find neither of her parents there. Dinner preparations have been started but left abandoned. Cherly goes about setting the table and sits down to watch tv to wait but as it grows later and later neither of her parents arrive home and Cheryl finds herself extremely worried and scared. 
    
    Her father finally arrives home to find her in hysterics and the next morning it's explained he had been out the evening with "the boys" unaware that his wife had to drive a pregnant neighbor to the hospital after she went into labor early.

    Later that day Cheryl joins her father on a fishing boat due to the chance of seeing whales. There she meets a friendly and sarcastic boy named Peter who she decides she hates and never wants to see again.

    As sorority rush season starts Cheryl becomes more and more stressed over whether she will receive an invitation to any of the teas and is relieved when she finally gets an invite to the Tri Phi rushing tea thing...or whatever it's called. It's an afternoon tea party for potential new members. It's being held at super rich-girl Patsy Moore's mansion and Cheryl is able to talk her mother into buying her an expensive designer suit to wear to it. 

    Once there she is handed off to Sue, a friendly girl that has the locker next to Cheryl at school. She seems to want to help Cheryl become a member, perhaps only to spite Ethel Barnes. Ethel was one of Cheryl's childhood friends who snubbed her after befriending the popular girls. Ethel is wearing the same suit as Cheryl and clearly not happy about it.

    Even with Sue's help Cheryl struggles to make small talk and feel at ease with the club members until Mrs. Moore takes an interest in her. Cheryl finds Mrs. Moore kind and friendly and helps her relax and make a better impression. Upon leaving Mrs. Moore bids her farewell saying "I look forward to seeing you again" which gives Cheryl the confidence that she'll be accepted.

    The next day is "s-day". The day when the sororities go around to the houses of the girls who have been accepted, give them a special necklace, and then "kidnap" them for a informal initiation ceremony. 
    
    Cheryl anxiously awaits their arrival, eating dinner early, continuously touching up her hair and makeup, and intermittently waiting outside. As the night gets later and no one shows up Cheryl telephones Judy and Alicia, her two best friends, and finds they've both already been picked up by the Tri Phis. Cheryl continues to wait but it becomes clear the girls are not coming and she has not been accepted. She spends the night crying her eyes out and being comforted by her parents who feel helpless to stop her pain.

    School the following day is a mix of overjoyed girls who've been accepted to a sorority or emotional girls who had not made the cut. Cheryl is told by Sue that most of the sorority had wanted to accept her but Ethel Barnes had discouraged them by mentioning Cheryl's uncle is an alcoholic who has been to jail. 

    Cheryl gets a chance to leave school early when many other girls burst into hysterical crying and mother's of the rejected girls are called to take them home. After spending the day running errands with her mom they go to visit Cheryl's 20-year-old cousin Dorothy who is visiting town. 

    Dorothy is beautiful, popular, and belongs to a college sorority. She tells Cheryl that she was rejected from sororities in high school and even in collage at first but the rejection encouraged her to find other interests and activities which helped her become a better person. 

    Her words don't help Cheryl much and she begins isolating herself, spending most her time alone in her room. Her parents are worried and begin considering sending her to another school but Grandmother discourages it. While visiting the family one evening Cheryl overhears her condemning her parents, telling them they've spoiled Cheryl to the point that she can't handle not having things go her way. Grandmother says what Cheryl really needs is a change of attitude and this makes sense to Cheryl who says she is sick and tired of being sick and tired.

    She goes along on an upcoming school outing to the Palisades (This book takes place in Los Angeles, by the way). A cliff has recently had a landslide revealing fossils and the science classes from multiple schools are going to view them, although many kids see it as an excuse for a day at the beach. 

    While there a kid is seen making a dangerous descent from one of the large houses at the top of the cliff. As he gets closer Cheryl feels he looks very familiar and is surprised to find it's Peter from the fishing boat. He recognizes her right away and partners up with her for lunch, much to the surprise of other girls who claim Peter is the son of a wealthy Hollywood director.

    Peter invites her up to his impressive house for a swim and she stays for dinner with him and his mother, his father is currently in Italy for work. Cheryl feels very much at ease with his mother, much like she did with Mrs. Moore. 

    The day helps lifts Cheryl's spirits but as spring break arrives and all the sororities head to the cost to spend the vacation in rented cabins Cheryl again feels sad. But soon she gets an invitation from Peters mother inviting her along with them to their "desert hideaway" in Palm Springs. 

    She is very excited about this because she will be taking the bus there alone. Her fathers worries over how dangerous the Los Angeles bus depo is which intrigues and excites Cheryl all the more. 

    Once in Palm Springs Cheryl is picked up by Peter in a jeep and he drives crazily over the sand dunes and out into the desert where Cheryl finds their desert hideaway truly is a desert hideaway, it's a stone house that has been built among boulders and hard to recognize unless close. 

    After the excitement of the L.A. bus depo fades Cheryl feels glum thinking about other girls enjoying a beach vacation with friends and boys while she's in the desert with Peter who she has no romantic feelings towards whatsoever. However within the next 4 days her feeling about the location change and she finds herself enjoying the beauty of nature and simple fun of their days, partly with the help of Peter's mother who tells her to "make the most of everyday as it comes" which Cheryl finds deep meaning in.

    Once back at school Cheryl appreciates her vacation all the more once Judy and Alicia tell her the pledges had been brought along on the beach vacation to act as servants and maids for the sorority members. Both of them express that they are sick of being treated like dirt by the sorority and would quit if it wouldn't raise a fuss.

    Still in a good mood Cheryl decides to try waking up to watch the sunrise the way they did in the desert and finds this gives her plenty of time the next morning to look presentable for school, something she never normally makes time for. 

    She remains in a good mood until later at school when she sees Ethel Barnes and Bill Meyers hanging all over each other and finds out they began going steady over spring break. She's so upset she runs out of school.

    Her broken heart soon mends when she gets busy helping her mother, who is a model, put on a weekly charm school class for disadvantaged junior high girls. Cheryl sees there are people whose lives are much harder than hers and she makes an effort to be a good example for them which includes being responsible over her appearance. 

    Her mother makes plans for the girls to have a fashion show at a local department store and while there with her mother to pick out the outfits for the show, Cheryl runs into Bill Meyers who is working as a stock boy. She is completely at ease talking to him now that he's not single and available and he finds her amusing and nice to talk to. 

    After the fashion show comes a charm school dance and Cheryl worries about who she can bring as a date that would be a good example for the girls. She doesn't think Peter would make a good example. 

    A few days later he shows up outside of her school in a flashy new car he had received for his recent birthday. He shouts for Cheryl to come join him in celebrating and she gleefully jumps into the car in front of the shocked Ethel Barnes. They have dinner at the county club then run out of gas on a long stretch of road and walk miles in the dark. Cheryl has fun recounting the evening to her friends but insists that Peter doesn't "send her". 

    The next day she goes back to the department store to pick up decorations for the dance and sees Bill Meyers who walks up, says he wants a girl like her and not Ethel, then they begin kissing.

    This ending to the book is very abrupt and very strange. The evening with Peter is less than a page long and the end scene with Bill Meyers is only a few paragraphs and comes out of no where. It's very strange and rushed. Maybe there was more but the book was too long and the end got severely condensed? I have no idea, I'm just confused.



- When Mr. Kramer is described as being younger than most fathers it says Cheryl's friends practice flirting with him which is disturbing.

- When Cheryl accidentally speaks her thoughts out loud to herself she covers her embarrassment by pretending she was talking to a guy passing on the street. That's a pretty confident move in my opinion.

- Cheryl's father is taking her and her friends to the rushing tea but he completely has no regard for whether he gets them there on time and drops them off an hour late. I thought that was incredibly rude.

- Winifred E. Wise was something of a feminist so I'm surprised to see that Cheryl losing weight through starving from depression is portrayed as a good thing.

- The teenage spring breakers are called "Easter bunnies" in this book and also in Wise's other book, Minnow Vail. This makes me assume that's what Wise, who lived on the California coast, and the locals called them in real life.



    I'm not sure how I feel about this book. I do like Wise's writing but I felt like a lot of nothing happens in the book, there's chapters where Cheryl is just at school or at home keeping busy and doing nothing worth noting. I actually liked that because it's different than most books. 

    I felt like Peter could have been in it more and Bill definitely could have. He's the love interest but only appears 4 times and only speaks to Cheryl twice, both times briefly. Even Feeny Chase isn't mentioned enough, Cheryl says she'll be seeing more of her but then she's never mentioned again. 

    Although I enjoyed this book I would say it lacks substance. Also the cover is not from a scene in the book which always irks me but worse than that it isn't of characters in the book either.

Friday, January 31, 2020

Minnow Vail


    What's I remember about this book: girl saving a bird caught in a net on the beach, girl getting her picture painted, girls cousin visiting and wearing a bunch of petticoat to school, boy bailing on girl for cousin. That's it. I also recall not finding it too special but I gave it 4 stars on GoodReads so I guess I'm not sure.

    As this book starts out we find Minna Vail, who people call Minnow because of her small frame, down on the beach one winter evening. She's gone there to sulk over being asked to be a Grunion in Carnival Of The Sea, a local yearly event. However what Minna really wants is to be one of the Mermaids aka beauty queens. She's 15 and feels it's time for her to start being seen as a woman but understands the difficulty in this because of her flat chest and old fashion father who refuses to let her wear makeup or perfume.

    The next day at school Minna befriends a Dutch foreign exchange student and, after finding out he's staying with an uptight elderly couple, makes an attempt to help him fit in more and give him a normal American teenager experience. She asks Bob, a longtime friend, to invite Hans to the beach on Saturday which is where all the kids go. After a little roughhousing Hans is accepted by the boys and later Minna invites him over for dinner, afterwards he teaches her how to Tango. Minna's parents take a big liking to Hans since they very much miss their son who is away at college and Hans enjoys being in a family's home rather than the elderly couple he stays with.

    During this time Minna's best friend, Laura, goes on her first real date. While visiting an aunt in Palm Springs she gets set up on a blind date with a boy and receives her first kiss while decked out in her aunts black sheath dress, rhinestone jewelry, and mink stole. Minna feels childlike compared to her friend so she decided to do something womanly of her own; perform the Tango with Hans at the Friday afternoon dance. It goes over well with everyone except Laura who is mad Minna hadn't let her in on her secret plan. Laura and Minna don't talk for several days but after Laura disappears from school for a week and no one at Laura's home answers the phone, she heads over to check on things. At the door she is greeted by Laura's father who tells Minna that Laura has a serious case of polio and isn't expected to live. Laura is unvaccinated because she didn't want to get a shot so her parents didn't force it. However the next morning we get news that her condition has improved a little.

    It's now Easter break and the town is dreading the arrival of the "Easter bunnies" which is what they call the out of town kids who come to spend their vacation partying at the beach. One of the Easter bunnies is Minna's cousin Lucia who stops at the Vail house to inform her Aunt and Uncle that she's only checking in because her father thinks she's staying with them. Lucia is Mr. Vails worst nightmare; she has bleach blonde hair, heavy mascara, reeks of perfume, and is accompanied by ill-mannered boys. Mr. Vail wants to call Lucia's parents but Mrs. Vail suggests having Minna join their beach party to keep an eye on Lucia. 

    Minna, against her will, goes and without warning received her first kiss from one of the boys to which she immediately slaps him. Lucia and her friends are gone by the end of the week but now George, the college freshman next door who Minna pines after, has arrived home. She ends up spending an afternoon helping him work on his car and is ecstatic when he asks her to play tennis the next day. 
    
    She arrives late after getting held up at school and George is no where to be seen, apparently having stood her up. They reschedule for the next day but at the end of the school day Minna sees George at the entrance talking to two senior girls. She breaks down crying thinking he must be standing her up again as there's no way he would have came to meet her at school. But here she's wrong and when he sees her crying he instantly consoles her and takes her out for a hamburger.

    Over the Spring Minna spends more time with Bob seeing him as a good opportunity to practice being more ladylike and less of a pal around males. They snorkel and swim together and when Laura is fast recovering they drive up to Los Angeles to visit her in the hospital. Bob also promises to help Minna win a position at one of the Mermaids at the Carnival and arranges for a family friend to paint her as a mermaid for posters (hence the cover).

    As summer is beginning Lucia comes to spend it with the Vails. Minna is miserable over having to share her room with Lucia and even more miserable when she finds out she is sharing boys with her too. All the boys flock to Lucia who begins to date Bob in secret but then abandons him when she meets George, although George doesn't last long either when an old friend of Lucia's shows up in town and Lucia ditches George mid-date.

    The beauty pageant for the coveted mermaid positions arrive and Minnow wins first place by preforming in her skin diving suit instead of an evening gown. However the next day she arranges for Laura, who now has to use a wheelchair, to take her place on the mermaid float so she can join in the parade and Minna instead takes a role as Grunion leader, a position she is now content with until she hears that Lucia is going to be chosen by the Octopus (the elected king of the carnival) to be his Queen. 
    
    Feeling overwhelmed by how lovely Lucia life always seems to end up Minnow hides in a gas station bathroom during the parade. She steps out to get a Coke from the soda machine when the Octopus approaches her. He reveals himself to be George and asks Minnow to be his Queen. Minnow suspects George is only asking her in an attempt to embarrass Lucia and begins to think of all the ways Bob has helped her that George never would. When the parade is over Minna goes to see Bob at his fathers hardware store where he is working, she offers him all her dances for the Ball that night, then has her first meaningful kiss.


- Minna's best friend Laura has her own telephone which Mr. Vail thinks is absolutely ridiculous, remarking "I suppose the next thing the Adams will do is get a phone for their dog". I found his attitude really funny.

- Minna takes the phone into the clothes closet to call Laura and they talk about the Grunion situation and begin to discuss becoming old spinster together when her mother tells at her to " come out of the closet". It made me laugh. I know, I'm immature.

- Minna's school is pretty intense with hazing and superiority. The freshman all have to wear caps and do whatever the seniors says. They also are forced to eat on the steps and not allowed to eat at tables. This kind of stuff is so creepy and inappropriate in this day and age that it just makes me uncomfortable.

- Laura nonchalantly mentions that she gets paid a dollar for every half a pound she loses. This seems odd.

- Minna is always making observations which just seem weird. Like when she's on the beach looking at the sea and think it will be here after people are gone, when she stands outside her house and acknowledged that it has character, when she sits in her fathers lap before the fire and thinks how cozy her home is, when she sees her parents joke with each other at the dinner table and realizes they're people and "lovers". Its just weird and clearly for the benefit of the reader but it comes off so awkward because this is Minna's everyday life and there's no reason for her to be acknowledging these things for the first time. It's not like any eye opening event has happened yet to make her see things in a new perspective, we're only on chapter three.

- Its not until chapter three that we're told Minna has an older brother in college. That seemed kind of weird not to mention when were introduced to her parents.

- While Hans is over at the Vails for dinner he "matter-of-factly" mentions that his father was killed in a concentration camp. It was thrown so suddenly into the dialogue that I stopped in shock for a minute.

- Minna's school has a dance every Friday afternoon which seems very extravagant.

- Mr. Adams announcement that Laura has polio and isn't expected to live is so sudden that at first I thought he was joking.

- On page 99 Mr. Adams is mistakenly called Mr. Vail. Second book I've read in a row that had that kind of mistake.

- Mrs. Vail comforts Minna about the possibility of Laura dying by saying there's fate worse than death, Laura might live and be a "cripple". I think most disabled people would disagree.

- When it comes to Carnival by the Seas the Mermaids have to be picked by judges but there are certain rules such as a girl can not compete if she is a model or a "professional beauty". I think that's a pretty great way to give a fair chance to all the girls.

- Minna's mother remarks that she is glad Minna is spending more time with Bob lately since he's "possible" i.e. attainable. That's so weird and rude to say to your insecure teenage daughter. 
    Mrs. Vail is actually very rude to Minna. She gives her no sympathy or understanding when Minna is distressed over things with Lucia. Mrs. Vail claims Lucia is visiting to help her learn not to be such a spoiled brat yet when Lucia does stuff like claim she's allergic to housework, Minna then has to do it all. How is this teaching Lucia anything?

- I really like Bob. In these type of books there's always a boy next door who sees the main character as a chum and they partner up for dances and the like out of convenience. The boy always teases the girl terribly but by the end he has a romantic interest in her. I expected this book to be the same but was pleasantly surprised. Bob, although he sees Minna as a pal, is very kind to her. When they go out swimming she gets frightened and wants to head back but worries he will call her a coward but instead he readily agrees and doesn't tease her. He begins to see her as a woman without any prodding from her, even calling her cute in front of his friends at the beginning.

    One of the best things about this book is that Wise has added a touch of realness; when Minna is described as being flat chested rather then just having it hinted at by saying she was petite or something, when reading an article about boys it mentions "sex appeal" to which Minna thinks sex is too far ahead to think about, Lucia stays out till 4am necking with a boy in the backseat of a car, and when Hans goes off in rapid Dutch it says he could have been swearing.

    Overall this book is very lovely. Characters like Minna and Bob are very likable, it's realistic, and it's just overall heartwarming. Winifred E. Wise did a wonderful job and I very much enjoyed this book.